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3) Vũ Đình Huy

0:05 whiCH makes me have good feelings

0:08 devoTE my time (not đi vâu)

0:10 viSIT this plaCE (not vistic đít plây)

0:16 Nha Trang BEACH (not BÍCH (LOL) – or BIS)

0:19 place whiCH can attract.

0:23 không nghe thấy gì cả @@. To the best of my knowledGE. benefiCIAL. appropriaTE

0:32 in order to have some relaXING days (not rì lạt đâys)

0:34 at nha trang beaCH (not bích)

0:42 family uSUally (sual này khá nặng, bạn lên youtube search usual pronunciation và nghe theo nhé).

0:46 reduCE some Stress (not rì điu săm trét)

0:56 deliCious

0:58 Price (not rice)

1:05 rEAsonable – Ri zừn nờ bồ (not re sừn nà bồ)

1:15 very surprising?

1:22 help each OTHER (not ích o đờ)

1:46 occaSION – ọc cây ZHừn (not ọc cây xừn)

1:54 đe là cái gì @@ THERE nha bạn đừng lười phát âm TH

Overall bài của bạn có khá nhiều lỗi phát âm, bạn cần luyện RẤT KỸ phần này trước khi nói. You have a lot to work on ^^ But try your best ! I love your passion !

4) Kim Chi

0:04 introDuce – cái này là không phải là in trô đu đâu nhé, nó là introjuce, bạn lên youtube search pronunciation introduce và educate để nghe rõ hơn nhé

0:07 late nineTEEN (not late nineTING)

0:09 toPIC (not topis)

0:31 two or three weeKs (not wis)

Overall : Excellent work !

5) Thuỳ Dương

0:49 mangroVE forest – bạn nên nói rõ âm cuối của mangrove ra nữa. Nếu không người ta sẽ nghe thành mangro forest

1:06 all enjoyED – bạn cần nói rõ phần Đ ra hơn nữa

1:11 local fooDs (not foos)

1:36 in a PEACEFUL place (not PISSFUL place) – mấu chốt là bạn phải đi ngang (tone) và kéo dài ra 1 chút. Đi lên (tone) và ngắn thì thành pissful place r :))

Overall : Excellent work !

6) Thu Hà

0:04 Thái nguyên HAS (not HAVE)

0:05 have many mountains and hills – lúc đầu mình không nghe đc từ mountain, mình tưởng nó là modern hay gì đó. Mãi lần thứ 5 mình nghe lại mới đoán đc. Bạn cần nói chậm và rõ từ ra =.=

0:07 especially the ….. to you – cũng không nghe rõ :v

0:09 today, I will tell….. a story – không nghe rõ, có thể là tell you ? Bạn cần nói chậm và không bị díu từ

0:12 of the FIRST time – phớts time

0:15 THree years ago – bạn phải tập phát âm âm TH cho thật chuẩn. bạn lên youtube xem các video hướng dẫn nhé. Search : how to pronounce the TH sound

0:27 from far, to …… of car – mình không nghe được. Bạn nói nhanh và các từ bị díu chả nghe thấy gì luôn….

0:31 before my eyes…. Beach gì gì đó along the coast Đoạn này lại díu. Không nghe được luôn

0 :35 oh my god không có s. hoặc có thể là oh my gosh – thì phải phát âm s nặng.

0 :38 I cream gì gì đó không nghe đc huhuhuhu

0 :44 iMAgination (not iMIgination)

Overall : Bài của bạn khá khó nghe, bạn nên vận dụng SLOW DOWN THẦN CHƯỞNG, PHÁT ÂM TỪNG TỪ RÕ RÀNG. Rồi tăng tốc sau

7) Minh Nguyên

0 :24 my hometown’S river – phải có sở hữu cách

0 :29 provided water and cái gì đó mình không nghe đc, bạn nên nói chậm và rõ từ này ra

0 :36 friends and I uSEd – bạn thiếu S ở used to

0 :46 the tree lines – bạn nên nói chậm và rõ từ tree lines, mình nghe loáng thoáng tưởng three lines

0 :49 coverED us – thiếu ED nha ^^

1 :08 contemplated – ở đây không nên dùng từ này nha, bạn dùng sai nghĩa contemplate rùi

1 :16 if i had a wiSH – sờ nặng nhé

Overall : You have very good control of past tense and pronunciation. However, you can still make it clearer by slowing down just a little bit.

8) Trung DT

0 :03 i thinK (not I thing)

0 :28 rememberED – phát âm ED rõ ra nha b ^^

0 :33 showED – phát âm ED

1 :00 showED – phát âm ED

1 :07 iMAgine – phát âm là i ma gìn (not i mây gìn)

1 :53 concluSION – phát âm là con clu ZHừn (not con clu dừn)

Overall : Great control of past tense which is really good for grammar. You need to be a bit clearer in terms of pronunciation, which means slowing down a bit and pronouncing each individual word more clearly especially the ED sounds as shown above. I like the editing, the sound effects and the feeling you give the audience ^^! Keep up the good work

9) Thanh Phuong

0:02 today I’m going to tell you bababababa holiday ever – I literally loled . It’s good to have some speed. but not TOO MUCH speed.

0:13 Nha Trang IS located in KH province

0:16 it’s ONE OF THE MOST….. – again, it was too speedy. you need to apply SLOW DOWN THẦN CHƯỞNG to make it AS CLEAR AS POSSIBLE

0:18 beaches OR bitches LOL. THIS IS VERY DANGEROUS. PLEASE MAKE IT CLEAR. BEACH IS LONGER. BITCH IS SHORTER

0:35 Schools of fish – Excellent choice of vocab, but again, wasn’t pronounced clearly enough.

0:37 the water surfaCE – pronounced xơ phợts (not xơ phây)

0:39 SHINES bright like a diamond – I like this one. But please pronounce it right next time :))

0:41 and I love the … of the sea so much – I could’nt tell what you love, so again, SLOW DOWN THẦN CHƯỞNG please

0:51 memorable and priCEless – i had to replay 3 times to make sure I heard it right.

1:25 a drop OF water – you didn’t pronounce it clearly enough

Overall: I adore your intonation and some of the vocabulary choices. And your pronunciation is MOSTLY clear, I’ll give you that. BUT NOT THE ONES ABOVE. PLEASE SLOW DOWN AND BE AS CLEAR AS POSSIBLE. DON’T NUỐT ÂM.

10) Lưu thị Hiền

0:00 Hi guys, my name IS Lưu Thị Hiền, this IS the second time… – Hi Hiền, nice to see you again, but where is your “IS” =__=”

0:14 it’s not A nation wide tourist attraction – good choice of word, but please pronounce the D in wide, otherwise it will become “nation why?”

0:14 famous (not phây s mớts) – you NEED TO CONTROL YOUR S SOUND

0:17 it’s a park nears my house – Why did you say nearS my house?

0:22 people often goes to the park – AGAIN, you have S problem

0:28 freSH – it is SỜ NẶNG not sờ nhẹ

0:29 I’m not AN exception – you have to add A, AN when the noun is singular PLEASE PAY ATTENTION TO THAT

0:31 I often GOES to the park – AGAINN

0:33 for walking – pronounced woắc kinh (not working – wuốc kinh – which is what you said)

0:47 give me còm phót tơ bô feeling – It is wrong on so many levels. Please have a look at this https://www.facebook.com/2852215984…

0:50 and sometime I goes to the park – if you can MOVE your S from GOES to SOMETIME – that will be great. SOMETIMES always HAS S.

1:05 park is not only A place for – please add “A”

1:08 it also giveS me a chanCE – AGAIN, you didn’t pronounce the S when needed. GIVES and CHANCE

1:10 to make friendS AND improve my senSE of community – I LOVE THE SENSE OF COMMUNITY THING, BUT PLEASEE HAVE SSSSSSSS.

1:28 it also remindS me of unforgettable memories – YOU ALWAYS SEEM TO PUT THE S IN THE WRONG PLACE.

Overall: I really appreciate your effort and choice of word, I love it when you said “sense of community” but then I also hate it when you said it without the S. You have a HUGEEEE problem with S. please slow down and be aware of where you should and should not put the S sound. remember, it is very important where you put the S. Cheers!

11) Ngân

0:10 many placeS – you need plural

0:15 I enjoy scenic beauty and … water very much – I couldn’t hear this. Please be clearer next time

0:19 Binh Ba island – there’s no S in island. it SHOULD NOT be pronounced.

0:22 I chose to talk about it because – I had to replay 3 times to understand this part, please slow down and say each word separately

0:32 I went there with some of my friendS – S problem 🙂

0:35 near the BITCH or the BEACH? – YOU HAVE TO BE CAREFUL WITH THIS ONE. ONE IS LONGER, ONE IS SHORTER

0:38 of this plaCE – please have S next time :'(

0:39 the wave crashing onto the cliffs – not so clear, again, it’s lucky that I have great listening ability. please apply SLOW DOWN THẦN CHƯỞNG here 🙂

0:42 – 0:50 please apply SLOW DOWN THẦN CHƯỞNG here 🙂 – I couldn’t hear them

0:56 make MOnument with the sand – stress is on the 1st syllable (look here https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fAt…)

0:59 – 1:06 LOOL, I guess you have to cut the clip to TAKE A BREATHE. Because your sentence was too long. You SHOULD KNOW WHEN TO STOP TO BREATH. IT WAS NOT TOO CLEAR ALSO.

1:06 and đì a đơ delicious food (or fruit?) – please dont say đì a đơ, say “the other”

1:18 experienCE – again, S sound

1:25 I enjoy the bitch life? LOL, it should be BEACH, the long one.please fix this IMMEDIATELY

1:37 something worTH visiting (not worSE visiting)

Overall: cool video! but still there are several pronunciation problems that are very serious (which means BITCH or BEACH). and some other small problems: the S sound and speaking too fast sometimes.

12) Hi Linh Tran, a few mistakes were: this is the first time I join (not: I’m join), water (not: waterS), (?) down to a lake in my hometown (you spoke too fast here), I’m standing near THE lake, feel (not: frill), comfortable (stressed on the 1st syallble) (admin #2 is going to be so mad since he mentioned this last week haha. have a look here https://www.facebook.com/2852215984…), relaxing (not: reraxing), “full of wind” should be “very windy”, some housES, love here (not: laugh), that IS the end, thankS for your watching, and good bye. Wow we love the view of your hometown, too. You are very confident and your pronunciation are great. Good awareness of intonation makes it easy for the audience to follow your sentences. However, be careful with final sounds and the usage of R sounds. You have a great energy already. Keep practicing!

13) Hi Tran Gia Hue, a few mistakes were: tell you more about A place, visiting (not: visting), when I was five (not: when I was in my fiveve), during most of the journey (not: during a lot of journey), breath taking WITH the blue sky, also (not: alsho), waves (not: ways), crashing (not: crossing), INTO the rocks (not: onto the crocks), enjoy (not: entroy), sand castles (“the” is not needed), walking (not: working), in the future (slow down a bit so it doesn’t become “indafutra), more chancES. We love your enthusiasm and your intonation. However, becareful with some pronunciation mistakes of final sounds, adding and leaving syllables. That being said, this was a great video for your clear pronunciation and coherent sentences. Keep up the great work!

14) Hi Le Nhan, a few mistakes were: beaches (not: speeches), ran (not: ron), get rid of stress (not: get rid of stressed), breath taking (not: brest taking), “visit Nha Trang” or “go there” would sound better than “visit there”. Wow! You have a great accent, which is very clear. You were also very calm and confident. Your intonation and pronunciation are almost perfect. Not many mistakes were made at all. This is among the greater videos of this week! Good luck! Stay cool.